Un-barbered facts lurk,
Recurring acts,
Unrecoverable losses,
Beeswax furnace the room,
Dazzling sparks,
Fervent tongues,
Tall tales litter the spot,
Currents stir,
Hairs stand on both ends,
Murmurings, murmurings,
Mouth watering,
Searching winter,
Haiti sea waves hit.
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An energetic poem as sparkling as the pictures. Great stuff!
ReplyDeleteReally, really liked this one, Taylor! Loads of energy in it and very captivating! *hugs*
ReplyDeletesounds like a magical place
ReplyDeletewealth of laughter senryu
Magical just like your blog :)
ReplyDeleteMagical indeed and the pictures were a perfect touch. Wonderful and it made me feel like a child splashing in the water playing with fairies. Nice! Be blessed.
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Amazing choice of words and an unexpected feeling of anxiety in the end... It seems there's beauty and danger of nature shown here... Well done!
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