Chasing Rainbow By Jude Underwood
Thursday Flash Fiction Week 28: Innocence and Dreams
Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally Week 74 (October 4 -October 10)
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Love is
A rain of cello strings
In the wind,
.
The mind’s cake
Sliced evenly,
.
The old faithful
Springing at the heart of light.
.
Deep in dark waters
unlocked lips, sunlit lurking.
.
A castle,
Not of rocks but snowy clouds beyond
The reach of earth,
.
One single expression
to the unfrenzied space,
.
The sips of honey near the cabinet
The bite into bread again.
Love is
A rain of cello strings
In the wind,
.
The mind’s cake
Sliced evenly,
.
The old faithful
Springing at the heart of light.
.
Deep in dark waters
unlocked lips, sunlit lurking.
.
A castle,
Not of rocks but snowy clouds beyond
The reach of earth,
.
One single expression
to the unfrenzied space,
.
The sips of honey near the cabinet
The bite into bread again.
excellent descriptions.
ReplyDeletelove is common sense sometimes.
ReplyDeleteto me,
ReplyDeletelove is selfless contributions!
and embrace.
ReplyDeleteprecise and cool.
ReplyDeletexo
wow...
ReplyDeletehandsome take on love.
ReplyDeletesmart words.
ReplyDeletebreath taking word flow.
ReplyDeleteamazing words.
ReplyDeletevery true words.
ReplyDeleteyou are doing better than ever.
ReplyDeletecheers!
well put words.
ReplyDeleteimpressive.
ReplyDeleteloved this! especially the cake verse :3
ReplyDeletelovely metaphors.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed reading this.
ReplyDeletegood writing...
ReplyDeleteJJRod'z
lovely imaginations.
ReplyDeletecute.
ReplyDeletecute.
ReplyDeletelove is forever theme,
ReplyDeleteno one can fully understand how or why exactly.
powerful definition of love.
ReplyDeletelove your point of view on love in general.
ReplyDeletelove it.
ReplyDeletenicely done
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeleteway to goat.
ReplyDeleteA castle,
ReplyDeleteNot of rocks but snowy clouds beyond
The reach of earth,
Love the imagery in this piece. This is my favorite stanza!
I love the play of emotions and the dance of images. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteYou painted a fantasy here. Everybody would love 'love' this way but then again reality sets in. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteCheers!
this is fun!
ReplyDeleteLove is a whole other world sometimes, and you've painted its picture very well!
ReplyDeleteglad to see you view on love.
ReplyDeleteYou are so true about love :-)
ReplyDeletesense making lines on love.
ReplyDeletelovely writing.
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