Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Thursday Thinking Tank in Flash Friday 55





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She decides to walk away from the balcony
of the outer space community,
After an alien abducted her hubby
and damaged the reputation of her family.
Dumping all the evil-mails to the loony bin,
Drawing strength from her magic tin,
She stretches her wings and fly,
She survives
By descending to earth
for a rebirth.

26 comments:

  1. Have not had a Sci-Fi 55 in a while
    loved your story My Friend.
    I hope you found this to be challenging, creative, and FUN!!!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. those probes will screw up a spouse faster than anything...and evil mails usually get caugh tin my spam filter...ha...fun 55

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  3. Mmm. Poetry and a lovely picture, too! D

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  4. Enjoyable 55 with possibilities for a longer tale

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  5. Ah, the proverbial problems with a family reputation! All it takes is for one person to screw up and look what happens.
    Fun write.

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  6. "She decides to walk away from the balcony
    of the outer space community,
    After an alien abducted her hubby"

    I love it. :-)

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  7. Great story, beautifully contracted for a flash 55. Imagination under the control of literary nous!

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  8. Me thinks there is a real story behind this story.

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  9. Very clever tale for a Friday morning!

    Mine is at:

    http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/08/friday-flash-55-playing-with-pooches.html#links

    Have a delicious weekend!

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  10. Ooh, yeah, I see a bigger story, too. Intriguing. : )

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  11. Well Done; I love the play on words~

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  12. Enchanting poem. Brilliant! You got me with:
    Drawing strength from her magic tin,
    She stretches her wings and fly,
    She survives
    By descending to earth
    for a rebirth.


    Very creative!

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  13. interesting!
    honestly, i am a sucker for alien poetry :)

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  14. Hello.
    Aliens abducting hubby & evil mails...what imagery you conjure up!

    Great post!

    Thanks for sharing.

    Remove These Satin Sheets...

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  15. This sure had my mind reeling wondering where you would go with this one. I really enjoyed reading this and getting the images you describe!

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  16. Sci-fi poetry with reality mixed in. Cute!!

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  17. What neat rhythm to this writing.

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