Raw poetry comes
when one's skills await until
well done
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smoking sausages
the alternate of pork ribs
bake---boil
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rivers of overall friends
peaceful flare to shuttling wars
poor-rich
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radio shack wires up
lots of boxes of musical products
window-door
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type a word or two
thoughts climb the screen via fingernails
mouse-cat
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Venom, fossil, or bones
ancient dinosaurs distract museum audiences
wiggle-motionless
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The Tuesday Platform
Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #18 Yugen haiku
3WW Week No. 453
Whirligig 33
Wonderful entry... poetry always toouches ones soul
ReplyDeleteHave a nice abc-day / -week
♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)
excellent.
ReplyDeleteVery nice series of haiku. Welcome at Carpe Diem.
ReplyDeletewonderfully put
ReplyDeleteI especially LOVE the first stanza
ReplyDeleteROG, ABCW
Rivers of friends...I like it.
ReplyDeleteInteresting style of poetry.
ReplyDeleteLeslie
abcw team
Wonderful set.
ReplyDeleteThe very definition of raw poetry - raw and alive - Venom, fossil, or bones - a brilliant line!
ReplyDeletesmart raw haiku.
ReplyDeletenice.
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff.
ReplyDeleteLove your style ... Bastet
ReplyDeleteamazing words.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting haiku! I was curious, so explored your Yugen link - to my delight and gratitude. Needless to say, I'll be having a go. :)
ReplyDeletelovely.
ReplyDeletelove this.
ReplyDeleteThere is poetry everywhere we look, the secret is to take the reader into another world. Your poem certainly set my mind seeing those pictures you created.
ReplyDeletevivid imagery.
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDeleteway to go.
ReplyDeleteYou are a talented poet.
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