Wednesday, March 4, 2015

haiku

early at morning,
icy sidewalk loses fraction,
a fall without caring.
.
ankle and feet injury,
purple, blue, red, and painful,
a March incident.
.
Mountain lake point,
wild geese meet a troop of cranes,
the moon ducks her head!


 
 
 

17 comments:

  1. Very nice. I like how your poems shows different sides of winter. I love the ending: "The moon ducks her head!" It definitely leaves the reader to wonder what would happen next! Well done!

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  2. vivid imagery and lovely haiku.

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  3. stunning haiku.

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  4. love what you write here!

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  5. I love early morning scenery :-)

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