Image Credit: Meredith Storm
Thunder storms from Sand Springs,
and glittering daydreams
constantly appear...
First sight impression,
Desperate souls differ,
and clash above clouds without a halt,
Crushes transform into limitless fire,
July orchards, of leaves,
Fallen petals of pink flowers
with soft edges...
Orange seeds in yellow texture
and bitterish juices,
Oh, the rain you bring
goes down on earth,
then rises to branches of trees,
until the perfect wind
sends it flying,
higher and further,
back to wondrous clouds,
preparing for another serious weather...
and glittering daydreams
constantly appear...
First sight impression,
Desperate souls differ,
and clash above clouds without a halt,
Crushes transform into limitless fire,
July orchards, of leaves,
Fallen petals of pink flowers
with soft edges...
Orange seeds in yellow texture
and bitterish juices,
Oh, the rain you bring
goes down on earth,
then rises to branches of trees,
until the perfect wind
sends it flying,
higher and further,
back to wondrous clouds,
preparing for another serious weather...
have fun writing.
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