Wednesday, February 20, 2013

Trust Is A Must

Magic can happen from writers' fingertips,
Since a thread of muses strengthens,
The world is seen in corridors of imaginations,
Emotional and raw,
A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!
If issues thrust,
Trust is a must.
Opals of envy don't fit,
Sheepish hesitations can wait,
I yearn to embrace
omens in faith.

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74 comments:

  1. Jannie FunsterOctober 4, 2011 at 3:00 PM

    Opals of envy we must let drop into the Pool Of Wisdom so we can concentrate on letting our own best shine. Well said!

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  2. AnonymousOctober 4, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    "A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!" So true. Love the poem

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  3. kaykualaOctober 4, 2011 at 7:26 PM

    Writers pen their thoughts trusting themselves. Issues that arise can best be discussed in alike manner - with trust. How true! I like that!

    Hank

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  4. AnonymousOctober 4, 2011 at 7:40 PM

    I yearn to embrace omens in faith--what we'd all probably like. Something to hold onto!

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  5. Brian MillerOctober 4, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    trust is a must...true that...

    do we as writers break trust in the writing or in our readers for changing voice...what level of trust does the writer have with the ones that choose to read...i know i am ranging well off topic at this point it just made me pause and think regarding trust when it comes to writing....

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  6. Classic NYerOctober 5, 2011 at 3:02 AM

    "A poem may not mirror one's mood at all"... I'm glad somebody said it...

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  7. Chim's World of LiteratureOctober 5, 2011 at 4:40 AM

    beautiful...

    something for you: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/10/versatile-blogger-award.html

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  8. Teresa MarieOctober 5, 2011 at 7:44 AM

    I absolutely loved this poem! Fabulous job!! Blessings, Terri

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  9. davidrheinsOctober 5, 2011 at 10:27 AM

    you never know when inspiration will manifest

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  10. BubbaOctober 5, 2011 at 10:34 AM

    One can never fully embrace without trust, nor pray without surrender.

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  11. Danny Earl SimmonsOctober 5, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Trust IS a must.

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  12. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    Like the line, 'A poem may not reflect one's mood at all" - Quite true...Well said!

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  13. DaydreamertooOctober 5, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    Yes indeed trust is a must in all walks of life.
    Well said and penned!

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  14. The twenties girlOctober 5, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    Very well written... I really like the line about poems not reflecting the moodof poets at all.. It's so true, but very few people understand...

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  15. AlcinaOctober 5, 2011 at 12:48 PM

    Nice message..and very beautifully weaved thoughts..

    Alcina

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  16. Ed PilollaOctober 5, 2011 at 12:52 PM

    yearn and faith are heavy concepts, and it's a treat to see a piece develop so wonderfully well from magic to faith:)

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  17. Maude LynnOctober 5, 2011 at 12:55 PM

    I love the last two lines! Wow!

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  18. FountainsOctober 5, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    The world is seen in corridors of imaginations - amazing.

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  19. Marbles in My PocketOctober 5, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    Very nice, Morning! I like this one!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/05/treasure/

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  20. Rocky Mountain WomanOctober 5, 2011 at 3:16 PM

    lovely, Morning...

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  21. My name is RietOctober 5, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    Very good. Love it

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  22. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 4:45 PM

    Fell in love with the title, and stayed enamored and in the throes of your words through to the end. :-)

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  23. Kristen HaskellOctober 5, 2011 at 4:52 PM

    This poem perfectly states how I felt when I wrote my poem called "Naming my Monster." It was emotional and raw - the issue did thrust and I trust the readers to put myself out there like I did with that one. Beautiful work.

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  24. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 5, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    Every once in a while, the magic still comes from my fingertips. Thanks for this reminder that as long as I can write, nothing is lost.

    My Contribution

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  25. TeresaOctober 5, 2011 at 7:15 PM

    What a great poem! Truly is is magic when the poem flows.

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  26. AnonymousOctober 5, 2011 at 9:57 PM

    Such a true poem..."corridors of imaginations" love that! Yes, poetry is simply a painting with words. I may paint death, but it doesn't mean I'm dying, right? fine write ~!

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  27. ReflectionsOctober 5, 2011 at 10:23 PM

    This poem is quite the opal in and of itself, truly a gem. Love the imagery, the sense of writing with its own merit spoken.

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  28. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 2:21 AM

    Our imagination is such a great present life gives us and I read that in this wonderful poem!

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  29. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 2:21 AM

    Our imagination is such a great present life gives us and I read that in this wonderful poem!

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  30. EclipseOctober 6, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    beutifully expressed, well done.

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  31. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!
    If issues thrust, this is true at times. but most of the time poems reflect a poets emotions.

    I yearn to embrace
    omens in faith. heavy ending here.

    a very well written piece

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  32. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    please check mine too http://wp.me/pTDjw-vo

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  33. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 6:35 AM

    I really like this, powerful, thoughtful, and provoking, a real good poem, thanks, much appreciated, WS

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  34. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 7:53 AM

    Some great lines here! Loved 'embrace omens in faith'. Interesting what we ask our readers, and even ourselves, to go through when reading our words.
    Gene

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  35. 21 WitsOctober 6, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    A most charming poem, thanks!

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  36. steveroniOctober 6, 2011 at 8:43 AM

    Yup! Words might now convey actual feelings, thoughts...due to that wondrous 'magic'. You write good!

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  37. RajlakshmiOctober 6, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    very thoughtful write, powerfula nd so much depth in those words. beautifully written

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  38. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    'Since a thread of muses strengthens,
    The world is seen in corridors of imaginations,'

    Such great lines in a poem that connects us all in our desire to write, thank you.

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  39. UnknownOctober 6, 2011 at 12:29 PM

    I so agree with you ...I have written poems from the elderlies point of view,the abused ,sexually adventurous,the physically abused and the cheated ....none of which applies to me ! but people reading seems to think they do. I loved your poem thank you x

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  40. Jack Edwards PoetryOctober 6, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    True and articulately written poem. Great stuff

    Here is my entry:
    http://jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/10/everyone.html

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  41. LolamouseOctober 6, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    I agree with you on this! People often mistake everything I write about for my own personal experience when often it is inspired by something I read or someone I know or just my imagination. Like you say, you may have "a thread of muses." Great poem.

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  42. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    I'm sure someone's sure to have stated it but:
    "A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!"

    YES,so glad you wrote these words :-D

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  43. Ann LeFloreOctober 6, 2011 at 6:15 PM

    What true words you write on this one we do not allow mirror our thoughts and feeling when we write this is excellent.
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/05/today%e2%80%99s-feelings/

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  44. June_ButterflyOctober 6, 2011 at 6:58 PM

    Beautiful words of wisdom.Though most pieces I write reflects my feelings there are some triggered by a photograph or an event.Brilliant!

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  45. GlynnOctober 6, 2011 at 9:03 PM

    It's rare to think of trust and faith as necessary for writing poetry - rare but exactly right. Good poem.

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  46. AnonymousOctober 6, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    lovely lines there... we need to put in a lot of trust to understand or accept anything :)

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  47. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 5:49 AM

    Brilliant in so many ways! From the fingertips all the way to the embrace of omens! *big smile*

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  48. joannaOctober 7, 2011 at 11:44 AM

    I've always thought that all poems contain a truth, but that it is not necessarily the truth for the poet who wrote it. The poem just needs to find the reader for whom it rings true! :)

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  49. The PoetOctober 7, 2011 at 3:16 PM

    Hello.
    Nice write.
    I especially like the line "A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!"

    Thanks for sharing & visiting.

    Yesterday With You

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  50. poetryroadOctober 7, 2011 at 3:38 PM

    I like how this verse flowed. Smoothly with a bit of a clip in pace.

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  51. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 6:04 PM

    Whoe! very nice ...but, for me, put a briddle on that horse of creativity, and you will have a winner :-)

    ZQ

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  52. dsnake1October 7, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    heh, your first line already grabs my attention. :)

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  53. Anjum Wasim DarOctober 8, 2011 at 1:28 PM

    writers can change the destiny of nations.Wonderfully expressed

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  54. Cassiopeia RisesOctober 8, 2011 at 2:44 PM

    Nicely said and written.


    Melanie

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  55. UnknownOctober 8, 2011 at 9:05 PM

    very creative exploration of trust, enjoyed it ~ Rose

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  56. Rosie@travel-i-talesOctober 9, 2011 at 8:58 AM

    You've voiced our thoughts, except that you've done it with finesse!
    Rosie

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  57. shonejaiOctober 9, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    true. poems may not mirror the poet's mood at all. somewhat reminds me adrienne rich's Delta poem.

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  58. JennyOctober 9, 2011 at 7:06 PM

    Oh my heavens. This was amazing!

    I'm not even giving you my customary Alphabe-Thursday grade! You are soooo far beyond that silliness!

    Thanks for sharing this.

    Wow.

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  59. AnonymousOctober 10, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    "Emotional and raw,
    A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!" - I couldn't agree more :) Wonderful poem!

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  60. IsadoraOctober 11, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    Morning,
    Like opals our words have so many colors.
    Lovely,
    Isadora

    my entry:
    http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/10/04/sleep-well-my-dear-2/

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  61. AnonymousOctober 11, 2011 at 11:35 AM

    Lovely words :)

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  62. AnonymousOctober 11, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    lovely flow! I like this line "A poem may not mirror one's mood at all!" So true! Often I find the mood of my poetry comes out quite contrary to the mood in which I am feeling at the time.

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  63. AnonymousOctober 11, 2011 at 5:45 PM

    Trust is awfully important. Isnt it?

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  64. AvaOctober 11, 2011 at 8:41 PM

    So important to have trust in someone or something. Great work! Thank you for visiting my blog!

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  65. JBinford-BellOctober 12, 2011 at 8:39 AM

    I think on the surface a poem does not represent emotions at all but on a deeper sense they do.

    Poetry is for me both as a reader and a writer to delve into my deeper emotion.

    Obviously yours delved up some of my hidden soul.

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  66. JANUOctober 14, 2011 at 3:50 AM

    Beautiful.

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  67. California Ink in MotionOctober 14, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Your first line is excellent! Well done!

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  68. William LeedOctober 14, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    Very nice, love the emotion.
    William

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  69. Nefarious XOctober 17, 2011 at 5:59 AM

    This was a fun poem. Great wordplay.
    good job

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  70. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2012 at 10:56 AM

    Magic can happen from writers' fingertips,


    I think it does, every day
    http://unprecedentedintellectual.wordpress.com/2012/01/09/winging-it/

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  71. AnonymousJanuary 10, 2012 at 3:30 PM

    I enjoyed the last bit the most!
    I yearn to embrace
    omens in faith..
    For faith enables
    the flipping of coin for luck.

    Inspired me for the next line:)
    Excellent, inspiring piece!

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  72. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2012 at 3:54 PM

    Beautiful imagery.

    You've taken a wise, true statement and illustrated it in a magnificent way--not an easy thing to do!

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  73. ElizenaFebruary 22, 2012 at 6:47 PM

    I really enjoyed reading this.
    'Magic can happen from a writer's fingertips,' just really inspired me to keep on writing and to believe in myself. This was lovely. Thanks for sharing.

    http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/02/soul-song.html

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  74. Jeannette,March 12, 2012 at 1:47 AM

    i have been on leave from blogging for over a month. as always, i find your poems amazing and very refreshing...

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