Friday, March 18, 2011

Free Write Friday/Cloak Monk's March Challenge



Under the hot sun,
Germs are supposed to die,
But mosquitoes fly
and make virus multiply.
.
To stay cool,
Dive in a pool,
To have fun,
Grab a water gun.
.
To stay fit,
Eat diet and mediate,
To remain clean,
Use zipper bags often.




My entries 4 March 19 Challenge: cleaning
and Free Write Friday: Summer Fun

6 comments:

  1. This was pithy!

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  2. awesome
    makes me want to hope in a pool right now!

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  3. good one! I love the unexpected zipper bags at the end.

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  4. The perfect addition to free write friday! The rhyming made this great fun in itself! Thanks so much! Now I'm ready to play!

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  5. I love it. We'll all be over for a swim and some BBQ.

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  6. brilliant poem jingle, great suggestions ;)

    will keep them in mind.

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