"fake prophets vanish"great line.
Just like one waiting to leave the parent's home. Nicely done!Hank
Torment curls up to die...love this line..great write!
Lovely as always! God bless, Terri
"..to stretch my wings and fly." I think we have all been there one time or another.
I can truly imagine what it would feel like to have the gift of free flight. It would be so awesome.Lovely prose.
This is really lovely. I love the no more crawling towards scarred fate, and the curling up of torment.
This is a lovely sentiment. I used to love to drive to the ocean when I needed to free myself from life-stuff. Nicely done.
Inspiring write !--J.L. Seagull
i like the positive and uplifting note...nice one ~
Wow. I'm swept away by the sheer power of your short piece :)Beautifully done...I would quote my favorite lines, but all of it is my favorite line.Thanks for dropping by.~FireandIce
Reminds me of my favorite hymn-- Filled with solemn hope.Lovely work!
Hello.To be free to do anything we wanted...that would be a treat.Nice imagery & sentiments.Thanks for sharing & visiting. Much appreciated.The Beauty Of Love
I think we all know how it feels to want to be free.
I loved this poem before I could even read it. The photo match is beautiful. The length is perfect, and your words are lovely.I especially adore bird poetry...I can't seem to stay away from it myself ^^;lukewater
you always have freedom
Beautifully written piece.
I think you are flying, Morning. A lovely work here.
Simple poem, but with a lot of power. Great imagery.Lovely.Lady Nyo
Torment curls up to dieOh, I like this line.
This makes me think of a couple of dying lakes not far from her: Walker Lake in Hawthorne NV and Mono Lake in CA. There is such a sense of sadness and desolation when I drive by those areas, as there is in this poem. Yes, we wait for freedom.
Torment curls up to die... Very Nice
I love this - no matter how long or dreadful the night, dawn comes at last...
Hopeful and well said.
Like speaking of freedom..of hope..Love the way you make simple words so meaningfully powerful.
This reminds of those mornings when all I would wanna do is to forward the clock to the day after.
A beautiful write, Morning. Very nice!
"I cannot wait to stretch my wings and fly" I really liked the line:) Beautiful piece of writing!
Like to fly with you.
Very cool write - "scarred fate", awesome phrasing!
Such an inspiring write and I can feel the freedom of flight in flying well donehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/mirror-of-truth/
"Rusty notes are swept awayby forceful morning sun ray"powerful piece !!
A lovely poem.
Birth. admits the panorama of reality, expectation looms large.very good poem…I enjoyed this. thank you.
one as to read your poetry to see you took off, keep flying