Growing naked by the end of Fall,
I’m a tree grounded on the floor,
Fancy thoughts spring
with autumn rain on my chin,
I dream of flying
while birds have gone hiding,
I sneeze
when snowflakes descend beneath,
My body shakes
If someone scratch my legs with rakes,
…
I’m slowly aging
and my confidence is fading,
Just as I’m about to quit,
A girl with blue hair starts to change my fate,
She doesn’t mind that I’m bare,
I cannot talk, but she does not care.
She hops on me,
and starts to do things to make me happy.
I feel handsome
with my blue angel in my arm,
She reads to me day and night,
In her words I travel worldwide,
My eyes begin to glow
as passions in between grow,
I have become a magical tree
Even since she has come to stay.
"I have become a magical tree
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i like this line..the magic of love.
have a happy weekend! God bless you!
The lament of a soul deprived of choice can be most disheartening. You have brought it out very well with a tree subject to vagaries of the weather!
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"fancy thoughts spring with autumn rain on my chin" I like this magical tree!
ReplyDeleteThat's delightful. Morning. I like the way the child brings happiness and meaning to the tree.
ReplyDeleteJamie
This is delightful. Some wonderful lines joined up to create a really special poem
ReplyDeleteThis is sweet... I like the the way you've written it from the tree's point of view.
ReplyDeletelovely verses...enjoyed reading your post..Enjoyed every line of it..Thanks for share...
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. Smoothly moving from line to line. I truly enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteI like this poem especially the last two lines. Truly, when someone appreciates us even if we think we have nothing more to offer, to say we're happy is an understatement.
ReplyDeleteA well done narrative poem :)
Wonderfully done, I felt the seasons, as well as the emotions, thanks!
ReplyDeletethis is very sweet. I like it.
ReplyDeleteWilliam
Love transforms.aint it. :)
ReplyDeleteWe all need someone like this... :)
ReplyDeletecute! I think I need to find me a tree that I can make magical just by sitting on its limbs :-)
ReplyDeleteSweet and endearing.
ReplyDeleteHello.
ReplyDeleteLove does indeed possess some magic.
Lovely poem.
Thanks for sharing.
A Weeping Rose
'She reads to me day and night,
ReplyDeleteIn her words I travel worldwide'
For some reason this line just struck me. Beautiful personification..!!
Such a lovely poem. Paints lovely pictures
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