Friday, October 7, 2011

The Beautiful Couple ( Humor and 55)

She loves him,
He adores her,
They eat together,
They read together!
.
They hold hands
and walk together,
They enjoy
exchanging warm, mushy kisses.
.
When he wants to be hugged,
He calls her name,
Arms outstretched,
to invite her.
.
Who, do you think
is this beautiful couple?
She is his mother,
He is only two!
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30 comments:

  1. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 1:40 PM

    great twist :)
    Rach

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  2. UnknownOctober 7, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    awwww i remember those days ...thanks for the smiles x

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  3. Marbles in My PocketOctober 7, 2011 at 3:33 PM

    Very cute!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/07/somethin-bout-a-glitch/

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  4. AnonymousOctober 7, 2011 at 3:42 PM

    :) Lovely and fun!

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  5. Ann LeFloreOctober 7, 2011 at 5:30 PM

    This is so cute thanks for sharing
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/22/octopus%e2%80%99s-garden-in-the-shade/

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  6. Monkey ManOctober 7, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    Very sweet.

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  7. Lu AnnOctober 7, 2011 at 6:03 PM

    Wow, never thought it would end that way! I loved it. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comment.

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  8. ~✽Mumsy✽~October 7, 2011 at 7:25 PM

    What a beautiful poem!

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  9. robinOctober 7, 2011 at 9:01 PM

    ;)

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  10. CynthiaOctober 7, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    Luv! and so true and wonderful to witness this love.

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  11. G-ManOctober 7, 2011 at 10:42 PM

    Ha!
    You might have guessed...
    Loved your 55
    Very well thought out
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  12. AnonymousOctober 8, 2011 at 2:44 AM

    Thats cute. I like these twisters!

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  13. AnonymousOctober 8, 2011 at 2:44 AM

    Thats cute. I like these twisters!

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  14. LydiaOctober 8, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    Ah, but of course! I was beginning to wonder who is this dream couple!
    That would even make a darling greeting card with the right artwork accompanying it. :)

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  15. colleenOctober 8, 2011 at 8:18 AM

    Ah yes, I have been loved like that!

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  16. AnonymousOctober 8, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    Lovely. So sweet. One of the best kind of couples there is.

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  17. mindsingerOctober 8, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    Sweet! I though it was going to be an old couple!

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  18. Teresa MarieOctober 8, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    I love, love, love this one!!! So sweet. Well done and thanks for the smile :) Blessings, Terri

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  19. Brian MillerOctober 8, 2011 at 2:23 PM

    ha. nice twist in the end jingle

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  20. AnonymousOctober 8, 2011 at 2:28 PM

    Beautiful and sweet, I loved it!

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  21. Madeleine Begun KaneOctober 8, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    Beautifully and charming. Great ending!

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  22. Doctor FTSEOctober 9, 2011 at 1:20 AM

    Mushy kisses like overripe autumn fruit.

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  23. Laurie KolpOctober 9, 2011 at 7:36 AM

    Awww... that's so sweet!

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  24. Jannie FunsterOctober 9, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    This is SO sweet!

    My girl is 10 now but some of my best mothering moments were of reading to her when she was that snuggly little toddler lump so attentive by my side.

    Great 55!

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  25. SheilaOctober 9, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    ha - what a nice surprise ending :)

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  26. Emanita01October 10, 2011 at 3:59 PM

    Mine's 13 and...
    (I'm...well, now you know it's not polite to ask a lady her age...LOL)

    And, so back to my comment...
    Mine's 13 and he just stood up stretched out his arms and claimed a goodnight hug :-D

    Nice poem. Didn't count 'em but does 55 mean the wordcount and was this part of a writer's challenge?

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  27. MorningOctober 10, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    yes, look at the left of my blog, find the word count link, type your story or poem in the box, the tool will count for you automatically.

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  28. MorningOctober 10, 2011 at 10:12 PM

    yes, look at the left of my blog, find the word count link, type your story or poem in the box, the tool will count for you automatically.

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  29. VictoriaOctober 18, 2011 at 1:38 PM

    Ha! I was thinking of my dogs!

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  30. IsadoraOctober 19, 2011 at 3:45 PM

    Very sweet and loving ...
    Enjoyed it very much.
    Namaste,
    Isadora

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