Friday, October 7, 2011

The Beautiful Couple ( Humor and 55)

She loves him,
He adores her,
They eat together,
They read together!
.
They hold hands
and walk together,
They enjoy
exchanging warm, mushy kisses.
.
When he wants to be hugged,
He calls her name,
Arms outstretched,
to invite her.
.
Who, do you think
is this beautiful couple?
She is his mother,
He is only two!

30 comments:

  1. great twist :)
    Rach

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  2. awwww i remember those days ...thanks for the smiles x

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  3. Very cute!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/07/somethin-bout-a-glitch/

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  4. This is so cute thanks for sharing
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/22/octopus%e2%80%99s-garden-in-the-shade/

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  5. Wow, never thought it would end that way! I loved it. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comment.

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  6. Luv! and so true and wonderful to witness this love.

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  7. Ha!
    You might have guessed...
    Loved your 55
    Very well thought out
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  8. Thats cute. I like these twisters!

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  9. Thats cute. I like these twisters!

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  10. Ah, but of course! I was beginning to wonder who is this dream couple!
    That would even make a darling greeting card with the right artwork accompanying it. :)

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  11. Ah yes, I have been loved like that!

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  12. Lovely. So sweet. One of the best kind of couples there is.

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  13. Sweet! I though it was going to be an old couple!

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  14. I love, love, love this one!!! So sweet. Well done and thanks for the smile :) Blessings, Terri

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  15. Beautiful and sweet, I loved it!

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  16. Beautifully and charming. Great ending!

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  17. Mushy kisses like overripe autumn fruit.

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  18. This is SO sweet!

    My girl is 10 now but some of my best mothering moments were of reading to her when she was that snuggly little toddler lump so attentive by my side.

    Great 55!

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  19. ha - what a nice surprise ending :)

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  20. Mine's 13 and...
    (I'm...well, now you know it's not polite to ask a lady her age...LOL)

    And, so back to my comment...
    Mine's 13 and he just stood up stretched out his arms and claimed a goodnight hug :-D

    Nice poem. Didn't count 'em but does 55 mean the wordcount and was this part of a writer's challenge?

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  21. yes, look at the left of my blog, find the word count link, type your story or poem in the box, the tool will count for you automatically.

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  22. yes, look at the left of my blog, find the word count link, type your story or poem in the box, the tool will count for you automatically.

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  23. Very sweet and loving ...
    Enjoyed it very much.
    Namaste,
    Isadora

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