So many emotions in six lines! From chilly to excited, to wary to peaceful, to lonely to H-a-p-p-y!http://www.benjity.wordpress.com
Nice write. Love how the lines form, can be seen as waves/ripples across the lake or as 3 individual canoes themselves. Very aesthetic indeed. Thanks
Sounds like a woman on an adventure, one who triumphs.Yes,lovely!! Somuch in so few lines.
Looks lovely.Sounds deep.
Ms Morning--you sure pack a lot in this suitcase. Could be 3 stories in 6 lines. Bet you do all the packing for trips for your family!PEACE!
Such a wonderful opening set of lines.
This has an interesting contrast throughout with as it seems she has had many trials despite being born in water happy. Beautiful image.
short piece but with emotion-packed lines...i can feel the chill in the 2nd stanza..
Lovely write !
Beautiful images, strong piece.
A lovely write :-)
The first stanza is great! Well done
Beautiful ....peaceful serene then expectation then peace a certain ebb and flow to this piece thank you x
Serenity, emotions, imagery great write!
Very nice. It made me H-A-P-P-YZQ
Great poem. Masterfully written. Love the picture as well
What a lovely poem. I so like the way you slowed down the last word to give the impression of complete contentment. Clicking on my name should take you a couple of pictures of peaceful happiness which speak their own words.
Love the images in this one. I especially like the first 2 lines!
Interesting and beautiful words.
After everything that came before, the HAPPY is a nice surprise.
Just before the storm...I like it. 'The shadow in the rain' - that's a jewel of an observation.Rosie
Amazing emotions in such concise manner! Well done!