Thursday, January 19, 2012

Short Story Slam Week 19 in Haiku Form



Trees to us humans,
The same as food to our thoughts,
One dies without it.
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Birds and trees are friends,
Pray for sunny days and peace,
Morning springs music.

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My entry to short story slam is Haiku, 
each Haiku has 5-7-5 total 17 syllabus, for instance:

Trees, count as one,
Humans, count hu-mans, as two…

Hope that you enjoy a lovely Wednesday today!

20 comments:

  1. so clever ...I'm hopeless as Haiku so you have my admiration thank you x x

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  2. lovely Haiku.
    nice ideas compactly so succinctly and beautifully.
    good job.

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  3. Very nice haiku!

    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/18/dearest-joh/

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  4. yes, pray for peace and sunlight, I'm always. thanks

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  5. I love the last line - the images and sounds which are produced by three simple words: morning springs music are delightful and nearly endless. A lovely haiku!

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  6. Not a fan of most haikus but loved this one, thanks!

    http://wanderwithoutbeinglost.blogspot.com/2012/01/its-only.html

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  7. Very nice haiku! I've stopped trying, because I really stink at them. Very well done! ;-)

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  8. Wow!!! I loved your haiku, Taylor! blessings, Terri

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  9. Brilliant Haiku. Perfectly written.

    Here is my entry: http://www.jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/12/sorry-performance-poem.html

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  10. There's nothing like a double Haiku, to make my Saturday night! Nicely fitting!

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  11. Beautiful as always! Haikus are very grateful when you are trying to count syllables too, since the whole poetry form is based on syllable counting! *smile*

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  12. Wonderful haiku expressive in a few lines. Great job.

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