Trees to us humans,
The same as food to our thoughts,
One dies without it.
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Birds and trees are friends,
Pray for sunny days and peace,
Morning springs music.
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Poetic Forms Week 6: Back to Basics : counting syllabus
My entry to short story slam is Haiku,
each Haiku has 5-7-5 total 17 syllabus, for instance:
Trees, count as one,
Humans, count hu-mans, as two…
Hope that you enjoy a lovely Wednesday today!
so clever ...I'm hopeless as Haiku so you have my admiration thank you x x
ReplyDeletelovely Haiku.
ReplyDeletenice ideas compactly so succinctly and beautifully.
good job.
Very nice haiku!
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yes, pray for peace and sunlight, I'm always. thanks
ReplyDeleteNice haiku...I love writing them
ReplyDeleteGood job on the haiku!
ReplyDeleteI love the last line - the images and sounds which are produced by three simple words: morning springs music are delightful and nearly endless. A lovely haiku!
ReplyDeleteCalm and serene, beautiful.
ReplyDeleteeasy and cool...
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku work!
ReplyDeleteNot a fan of most haikus but loved this one, thanks!
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Wonderfully done.
ReplyDeleteVery nice haiku! I've stopped trying, because I really stink at them. Very well done! ;-)
ReplyDeleteWow!!! I loved your haiku, Taylor! blessings, Terri
ReplyDeleteBrilliant Haiku. Perfectly written.
ReplyDeleteHere is my entry: http://www.jackedwardspoetry.blogspot.com/2011/12/sorry-performance-poem.html
There's nothing like a double Haiku, to make my Saturday night! Nicely fitting!
ReplyDeletenice job with the prompt
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Beautiful as always! Haikus are very grateful when you are trying to count syllables too, since the whole poetry form is based on syllable counting! *smile*
ReplyDeletenice job... lovely words
ReplyDeleteWonderful haiku expressive in a few lines. Great job.
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