The sunshine colored umbrella
is her Kleenex,
dries off her tears or runny nose,
keeps her mood in comfortable
soft when days go stormy.
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In common senses’ fabrication,
A handy dainty tool
She is gifted from a unique box,
The feel of being under magical spell
soaks constant doubts of ambiguity.
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It’s heart breaking when virtue is out of steps,
with pseudo keeping in check,
this umbrella offers hope to wipe off consequences
caused by continued errors
that tarnish life in dumbness.
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One has to think twice before act,
Change starts from YourSelf,
Be the magical umbrella,
Let your own action speak,
Let life give you wings to fly.
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greeeat post amazing blog =)
ReplyDeleteLet life give you wings to fly...a beautiful phrase within a great post.
ReplyDeleteWonderful post.
ReplyDeleteHappy new year.
Such positivity - beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWonderful use of the prompt and a good story!
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Very beautiful example for existence - a rainbow umbrella. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteOoh, this is wonderful. Beautiful! : )
ReplyDeleteI like the umbrella as her Kleenex and the last stanza is wisdom!
ReplyDeleteOh, such an amazing analogy! You've made it all so simple yet so magical at the same time. Wow!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written...and I agree with your words in the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteThis is DIVINE, my dear.
ReplyDeleteSmiles.
love.
Great story telling.
ReplyDeletepowerful stuff with the simplest delivery.
ReplyDeletechange does start from oneself, if one refuses to change, it is impossible to expect others to do it.
empty slogan must stop upon one reads this.
keep it up.
Beautiful thoughts!
ReplyDeleteoh what a brilliantly written piece this is! so many great descriptions here - you captured the picture and spun it well - nicely done! change starts from yourself indeed!
ReplyDeletesmart metaphor,
ReplyDeleteeloquent thoughts,
Enjoyed it.
:)
Every stanza is magical and the picture matches your words perfectly! Great blog! :)
ReplyDeleteWould that we could peek out from under our umbrellas! Thanks.
ReplyDelete"Let life give you wings to fly" I love that line. Nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photo and message
ReplyDeleteSimple so beautiful...I enjoyed your poetry...
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by at my blog too. :)
Hugs!
Cool idea, Taylor. I love these lines:
ReplyDeletethis umbrella offers hope to wipe off consequences
caused by continued errors
that tarnish life in dumbness.
Our errors do tarnish our lives in dumbness if we don't wipe them away quickly; thanks for the reminder to keep our souls polished with forgiveness. :)
wise beautiful words!
ReplyDeleteI need that umbrella.
ReplyDeletelove this. xo
change DOES start from yourself. cheers.
ReplyDeleteA charming interpretation of the challenge prompt. I like the metaphor. It has a beautiful flow.
ReplyDeleteLovely,
Isadora
my entry for Bleubell:
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2012/01/05/a-celebration-of-a-life/
Lovely poem and thoughts.
ReplyDelete'Be the magical umbrella...' Nothing is more magical than opening up to the Universe to serve one's purpose :)
Well done. Very entertaining but packed with a powerful lesson indeed.
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Very well done! I really enjoyed reading it. Let life give you wings indeed. Be blessed.
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