Nice work. Autumn is fine, but the winter that follows...brrrrrrr, not so much!
Perceptive eyes you have!~Ames :)
What a lovely surprise indeed ~Happy autumn ~
Great poem. This feels like a burst of autumn.
Nice photos to go with your lyrics!=)
Ooh, lovely words and photos:-)
Lovely photos with the poem. I like Autumn but I don't care much for winter.ErikaArtful Rising
Wonderful words and pictures! :o)
nice bit of lyricism...autumn is my particular fav...
I hope you are enjoying the experience. Good take on the prompt.
Fresh and sweet.
Great job !I love watching the flocks of geese flying south for the winter...the circle of life is amazing to behold !!!
Very nice, so much activity this time of year:@)
Love the way you slipped the prompt into the sentence. laurie @ Battliung My Inner Critic
What a lovely little poem. Great job.
Simply sweet. I enjoyed this very much.
wonderful 160! thank you for sharing!
Quite delightful. Lovely, the way you conceive what could have been two independent poems and then bring them seamlessly together to make a poem in which the whole is greater than than the two parts.
Simply lovely!Best wishes,AnnaAnna's SC wk 72'In the Autumn'
Short and sweet! Very nice! My best wishes! Thank you for visiting my blog!
Wow~ness!You are combining several prompts into one piece! This is amazingness. Also, I'm seriously considering studying abroad for a semester, but I have a cat, so I'm not sure how that would work. But, I am thinking about it.
Lovely poem, snd thought provoking. I find flocks of geese in flight very inspiring :)
To get her degree in MPH's! ( wind)thanks for visiting-
She's pretty. And what great shots!
Lovely shot and lovely verse. Autumn is always mesmerizing to me!Hank
As always, you make me smile, Monday. Thank you!
Lovely!! Blessings, Terri
Autumn here in Atlantic Canada brings such vibrant colour to the trees.Your prose captures that feeling.
loved the vivid imagery... beautiful write
This is a wonderful poem and love so your imagehttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/19/my-world/#comment-925
Really liked how you blended two poems. Beautiful words you crafted
Oh this is so much fun! I love the cadence. And the story is so full of promise. A perfect autumn tribute!
I like the way you put Spain and rain together without using the well-known Pygmalion rhyme, but creating the effect of a metaphor -Nicely done.
Wonderful post! I like it!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/19/fragile-cloth-2/
loved the rhythm & rhyme!working at a university, I was acutely aware of the incoming freshman reference :)cheers,deborah
Quite a lovely verse, and I do love geese:)
simple and sweet!!
I don't know if you saw my entry to Kellie's free write Friday: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/16/it%e2%80%99s-too-low/
wonderful ... autumn is in the air.
Yes, there are surprising joys in autumn, aren't there? Nice write!
Sweet--still waiting for some of that autumn to show up here.
Oh wow. This was beautiful! I loved the rhythm of your writing and the pictures you painted with your word crafting.Just lovely.Thanks for sharing it.