Thursday, September 22, 2011

Flash Friday 55-Surprise

It's 3 am,
Her phone rings,
Home alone,
She decides to ignore,
"Bang!"
Someone is knocking at the door,
She couldn't ignore any more;
She gets up,
trying to turn on the light,
A pair of hands grab her thigh,
Hugging her...
She feels like screaming,
The hands pull her closer,
"Surprise!"
Says her hubby,
beaming.

*****
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24 comments:

  1. G-ManSeptember 22, 2011 at 8:44 PM

    Came home Drunk Again eh?
    Loved your 55 Morning.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. Brian MillerSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    not sure if that is a good surprise or bad...

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  3. magiceyeSeptember 22, 2011 at 9:15 PM

    :) 'surprise' connotes it was pleasant i presume?
    cool imagery!

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  4. kaykualaSeptember 23, 2011 at 5:17 AM

    Surprises can well result in heart failures, it seemed so! Great verse!

    Hank

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  5. KikitSeptember 23, 2011 at 6:13 AM

    I love surprises. Though I'm not sure if I'll feel the same way if I get them at 3:00 a.m. :)

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  6. izzySeptember 23, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    Oooh, that is a clincher- thanks!

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  7. BubbaSeptember 23, 2011 at 9:44 AM

    Nice 55 - complete with the happy ending (perhaps in more ways than one!)

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  8. Monkey ManSeptember 23, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    Interesting to read the different responses to what the continuing story after your ending might have been. Everyone has a vivid imagination.

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  9. DaydreamertooSeptember 23, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    I'm not sure if I would be happy or freaked especially as it's the middle of the night and being grabbed too!
    Yikes.
    Great 55!

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  10. Barbara F.September 23, 2011 at 12:43 PM

    Now this is a "wow", I wouldn't know whether to smack him or kiss him!! xo

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  11. JinksySeptember 23, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    Thinks:- was hubby very short that he hugged her at thigh level? LOL

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  12. Doctor FTSESeptember 23, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    I'm in troubler here! Very high-up light switch or very vertically challenged husband. Or is husband merely a drunken boor?

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  13. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarrySeptember 23, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    It is a piece of writing,

    a fiction.

    when I write it, I have this in mind:

    Hubby comes home from international traveling, thus the time is late.

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  14. Maude LynnSeptember 23, 2011 at 1:51 PM

    That could be a dangerous surprise!

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  15. Alice AudreySeptember 23, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    Oh, he is soooo dead!

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  16. StrangerSeptember 23, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    Is she happy about this surprise?

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  17. hedgewitchSeptember 23, 2011 at 3:51 PM

    Hopefully, a pleasant surprise.

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  18. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    this is where firearm ownership would get me and the hubby into trouble...by mistake!

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  19. LydiaSeptember 24, 2011 at 2:07 AM

    Now, I would consider a "surprise" that could lead to a heart attack as being a really poor idea. Boo-hiss on that hubby. But hurray for your 55.

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  20. LolaSeptember 24, 2011 at 5:32 AM

    Yes, hopefully a pleasant surprise ...

    Thanks for stopping by,

    Lola:)

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  21. Yvonne OsborneSeptember 24, 2011 at 9:07 AM

    A nice surprise, but still a heart attack! My hubcap likes to do that....startle the daylights out of me. I think he likes to see me jump. Pisses me off. Good 55!!!

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  22. ChristineSeptember 24, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    where you in the kitchen? this is usually the place I get groped expectantly

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  23. Steve IsaakSeptember 27, 2011 at 2:02 AM

    Good, fast-read write.

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  24. Classic NYerSeptember 27, 2011 at 12:00 PM

    This is so cute!

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