Sunday, December 4, 2011

Sunday 160: Hold My Hands


Things happen,
One after another
for inexplicable reason,
Moon tilts up her chin,
Clouds disperse,
Nobody is alone,
I'm here with You,
Hold my hands,
Walk on.

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16 comments:

  1. An appropriate poem to help us think to be ready to always offer a hand.

    Larry

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  2. I will miss the heart warming touch of 160s like these. Thanks so much for playing.

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  3. a hand often is just what is needed...

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  4. You packed a lot into 160 characters. I like the image of the moon tilting her chin.

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  5. Lovely--no one is alone when there's an outstretched hand. This is beautiful, Morning. xo

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  6. Sweet. You put a smile on my face.

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  7. Wonderful write. Very nice!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/04/then-snared/

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  8. an almost minimalist piece, almost concrete and Imagistic.
    powerful in its dearth of verbiage. uplifting finale.

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  9. Incredibly sweet, you've packed so much into 160 characters.

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  10. "Moon tilts up her chin," yes! Very lovely Morning! So very much love in 160 characters; I can see this becoming the poet's new trend...you are a beautiful young poetess and I love your poetry; sweet and subtle, but packed with so much love. Thank you for sharing.

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  11. ...the assurance of a loving hand..

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  12. awww .... that brought tears to my eyes ... "I'm here with You, Hold my hands, Walk on."

    Thank you ....

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