Sunday, December 4, 2011

Sunday 160: Hold My Hands


Things happen,
One after another
for inexplicable reason,
Moon tilts up her chin,
Clouds disperse,
Nobody is alone,
I'm here with You,
Hold my hands,
Walk on.

*****

What Can You Write in 160 Characters?

Check it out on  Monkey Man. 
Posted by at

16 comments:

  1. nitewritDecember 3, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    An appropriate poem to help us think to be ready to always offer a hand.

    Larry

    ReplyDelete
  2. Monkey ManDecember 3, 2011 at 10:30 PM

    I will miss the heart warming touch of 160s like these. Thanks so much for playing.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Brian MillerDecember 4, 2011 at 10:23 AM

    a hand often is just what is needed...

    ReplyDelete
  4. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 4, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    Beautiful and uplifting.

    ReplyDelete
  5. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    You packed a lot into 160 characters. I like the image of the moon tilting her chin.

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    Lovely--no one is alone when there's an outstretched hand. This is beautiful, Morning. xo

    ReplyDelete
  7. Alice AudreyDecember 4, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    Sweet. You put a smile on my face.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Marbles in My PocketDecember 4, 2011 at 5:16 PM

    Wonderful write. Very nice!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/04/then-snared/

    ReplyDelete
  9. tinkwelbornDecember 4, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    an almost minimalist piece, almost concrete and Imagistic.
    powerful in its dearth of verbiage. uplifting finale.

    ReplyDelete
  10. KayDecember 4, 2011 at 10:38 PM

    So endearing. Thank you!

    ReplyDelete
  11. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 11:54 PM

    Incredibly sweet, you've packed so much into 160 characters.

    ReplyDelete
  12. AnonymousDecember 6, 2011 at 3:09 AM

    "Moon tilts up her chin," yes! Very lovely Morning! So very much love in 160 characters; I can see this becoming the poet's new trend...you are a beautiful young poetess and I love your poetry; sweet and subtle, but packed with so much love. Thank you for sharing.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Jeannette,December 7, 2011 at 6:57 AM

    ...the assurance of a loving hand..

    ReplyDelete
  14. Robert Gibson: PWES EditorDecember 7, 2011 at 7:51 AM

    awww .... that brought tears to my eyes ... "I'm here with You, Hold my hands, Walk on."

    Thank you ....

    ReplyDelete
  15. Tarang SinhaDecember 10, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    Really nice:)

    ReplyDelete
  16. AnonymousDecember 18, 2011 at 4:01 AM

    Short, sweet and beautiful :)

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)