Friday, August 26, 2011

Free Write Friday (Haiku)



Away from home, Sigh,
Going high, I take a deep breath,
Write to escape death.

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submitted to Free Write Friday


Haiku Heights: Breathe



17 comments:

  1. Sounds like you would rather be back home. :( At least you have pen & paper for salvation.

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  2. Thank you for the entry. See you next week!

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  3. a very nice take on the prompts ~ wistful and almost melancholy. ♥

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  4. There's life enough in your haiku to save anyone. Well done.

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  5. A thoughtful haiku...I like it!

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  6. Deep, thoughtful and poignant haiku.. Liked it a lot!

    My post - Patiently Trying

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  7. writing has done wonders for me, it is a beautiful escape

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  8. hmmm away from home indeed feels like death but we can reconnect, I like the word play :)
    My entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/love-eternal/

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  9. Keep writing and live forever...
    I loved it!

    Here's my offering for the week: http://terri0729wordpress.com/2011/08/29/soul-kiss/
    Enjoy the picnic!

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  10. Like this very much. Well done.


    Melanie

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  11. much is faced by taking a deep breath. wonderful!

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  12. lovely Haiku. Thanks, hugs, pat

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  13. A bigger truth than you might realize. I think many people do this. Even Maxine Hong Kingston talked about it when she was in our city present on her latest book, a book of poetry ...

    Good job, Morning!

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