Sunday, November 27, 2011

Haiku on Light




Unknown future ahead,
Bars of light in shadowy site,
Leading wondrous feet.
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Hold me all night long,
In the light of love and care,
By becoming the air.
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Let’s go for a hide,
Where I pretend to be bride,
With love as our light.
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Nothing keeps us apart
As long as we cherish light,
the way we value life.
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Morning and Evening,
Attracting times of everyday,
Life is De-Light-FUL.
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Light shoots through your eyes,
Making my heart jump with joy,
What a sweet contact.
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Thankfulness from heart,
The light of exchanging love,
Can’t live without it.



Haiku Heights :    Light

Poetry Picnic at The Gooseberry Garden

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45 comments:

  1. Priyanka BhowmickNovember 27, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    lovely haiku series on light. good work.

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  2. anthonynorthNovember 27, 2011 at 12:44 PM

    You've brought light to the subject with those. Excellent.

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  3. Someone is SpecialNovember 27, 2011 at 2:15 PM

    Lovely set haiku's.. :-)

    Someone is Special

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  4. Craig WatsonNovember 27, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    Another great one !

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  5. ScarletNovember 27, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    You have explored all the areas of this prompt...well done ~

    Thanks always for your support ~

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  6. tinkwelbornNovember 27, 2011 at 3:17 PM

    Light, Haiku'ed in various themas -- physical, vehicle, principle, esthetic, condition, love, manner -- all sweetly performed.

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  7. DaydreamertooNovember 27, 2011 at 4:40 PM

    Lovely, love and light, can't ask for much more than that can we.

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  8. cherylNovember 27, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    Wow, awesome haiku Morning. My favourite line "light shoots thru your eyes" mmm mmm mmm

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  9. AnonymousNovember 27, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    Morning, your poem is the most beautiful and life=affirming poem I have read this year.

    Thank you.

    XoXo

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  10. AnonymousNovember 27, 2011 at 6:55 PM

    let's go for a hide, that made me smile :)
    that had an air of innocence to it, sweet!!! thanks for the visit! :)

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  11. steveroniNovember 27, 2011 at 7:13 PM

    You have let--with these haiku--love be the light which shines your way.

    Light--wisdom, knowledge--shines from that most powerful force in the Universe--LOVE!

    A really nice set, Morning...
    PEACE!

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  12. ZoeNovember 27, 2011 at 7:14 PM

    I haven't seen haiku like this before - you definitely capture a series of haiku and I love the rays of light woven through.

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  13. Marbles in My PocketNovember 27, 2011 at 8:00 PM

    Nicely done, Morning. Very nice!

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  14. Old RavenNovember 27, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Oh my ... you are prolific! So much light! :)

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  15. Ramesh SoodNovember 27, 2011 at 10:34 PM

    VeryenLIGHTening..indeed
    ..thanks.. Morning, Good Morning..

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  16. Susie ClevengerNovember 27, 2011 at 11:04 PM

    Love the light in your haiku...love does light a heart it shines upon.. :)

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  17. MeenaNovember 28, 2011 at 4:28 AM

    A fine haiku

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  18. NeniNovember 28, 2011 at 5:41 AM

    Cool! Love this poem. Like the De-Light-Ful! :)

    thanks for stopping by my blog

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  19. HemaNovember 28, 2011 at 5:58 AM

    "Light shoots thru' your eyes..."
    loved that one...:)

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  20. Teresa MarieNovember 28, 2011 at 8:04 AM

    Beautiful, as always, Morning! I love the "light" found playing in your words :) Blessings, Terri

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  21. Brother OllieNovember 28, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    In the light of love and care,
    By becoming the air

    really like this line - very smoothe flow and vivid image too.

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  22. NankaNovember 28, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    Love the many shades of light!!

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  23. TigerbriteNovember 28, 2011 at 12:31 PM

    Lovely sentiments on light.

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  24. Other MaryNovember 28, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    Nice haikus...lovely lights.

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  25. Tarang SinhaNovember 28, 2011 at 7:18 PM

    Really nice, especially the fifth one:)

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  26. Elaine DanforthNovember 28, 2011 at 7:28 PM

    Morning, this is beautiful, from the title all through to the end of the text. Haiku is such a wonderful form, and I really also enjoy strings of related ones, like this.

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  27. AnonymousNovember 28, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    well knitted set ~~ thank you for sharing!

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  28. AnonymousNovember 28, 2011 at 10:26 PM

    I wouldn't mind feeling a love like that :)
    Nice poetry

    lukewater

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  29. AnonymousNovember 29, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    *round of applause* well composed :)

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  30. AnonymousNovember 29, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    I love this verse:
    'Hold me all night long,
    In the light of love and care,
    By becoming the air.'

    Makes me think of dreaming

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  31. davidrheinsNovember 29, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    Love this. Favorite line: "Let’s go for a hide,
    Where I pretend to be bride"

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  32. Cassiopeia RisesNovember 29, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    Lovely Haiku sets. Each brings such beauty to the meaning of light.


    Melanie

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  33. Becky SainNovember 29, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    Love the haiku... I'm so not good at haiku. Love the way these flow. Thank you for this.

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  34. Jamie DedesNovember 29, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    Lovely, Monday. You're hallmark positive thinking. Wonderful.

    Hope you had a fab Thanksgiving.

    Warmest regards,
    Jamie Dedes

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  35. AnonymousNovember 30, 2011 at 7:17 AM

    Absolutely lovely.

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  36. NelsonNovember 30, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    Hello my dear friend! Enjoyed the post, loved the read... Congrats! Thank you for stopping by! I really do appreciate your taking the time to leave a comment...I read each and everyone of them. I hope your day is a good one and that you will come back again soon. Greetings from Rio de Janeiro/Brasil!
    Nelson Souzza :)

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  37. Gerry SnapeNovember 30, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    Such a great positive poem amidst a lot of negative....thankyou for your fun comment on my post!

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  38. kaykualaNovember 30, 2011 at 7:04 PM

    Morning,
    My, you lighted it up all the way. Great sets of haiku!

    Hank

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  39. Madeleine Begun KaneNovember 30, 2011 at 10:55 PM

    Wow! Just wonderful!

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  40. Laura MariaDecember 1, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    These are wonderful!

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  41. Classic NYerDecember 1, 2011 at 11:50 AM

    These are truly beautiful.

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  42. Gerry/Strummed wordsDecember 1, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    Nice verse on light and life...

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  43. SuzyDecember 1, 2011 at 8:38 PM

    Lovely Haiku. My favourite is
    "Light shoots through your eyes,
    Making my heart jump with joy,
    What a sweet contact".
    Brought a smile to my face.

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  44. The PoetDecember 2, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Hello.
    I'm always entertained whenever I visit here. Love these Haiku. The image is spot on too.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate the comment.

    A Sweet, Spanish Flower

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  45. UnknownDecember 3, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    Well written!
    "Light shoots through your eyes,
    Making my heart jump with joy"
    Thank you for sharing!

    -Erick Flores

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