Sunday, November 27, 2011

Haiku on Light




Unknown future ahead,
Bars of light in shadowy site,
Leading wondrous feet.
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Hold me all night long,
In the light of love and care,
By becoming the air.
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Let’s go for a hide,
Where I pretend to be bride,
With love as our light.
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Nothing keeps us apart
As long as we cherish light,
the way we value life.
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Morning and Evening,
Attracting times of everyday,
Life is De-Light-FUL.
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Light shoots through your eyes,
Making my heart jump with joy,
What a sweet contact.
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Thankfulness from heart,
The light of exchanging love,
Can’t live without it.



Haiku Heights :    Light


45 comments:

  1. lovely haiku series on light. good work.

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  2. You've brought light to the subject with those. Excellent.

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  3. Lovely set haiku's.. :-)

    Someone is Special

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  4. You have explored all the areas of this prompt...well done ~

    Thanks always for your support ~

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  5. Light, Haiku'ed in various themas -- physical, vehicle, principle, esthetic, condition, love, manner -- all sweetly performed.

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  6. Lovely, love and light, can't ask for much more than that can we.

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  7. Wow, awesome haiku Morning. My favourite line "light shoots thru your eyes" mmm mmm mmm

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  8. Morning, your poem is the most beautiful and life=affirming poem I have read this year.

    Thank you.

    XoXo

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  9. let's go for a hide, that made me smile :)
    that had an air of innocence to it, sweet!!! thanks for the visit! :)

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  10. You have let--with these haiku--love be the light which shines your way.

    Light--wisdom, knowledge--shines from that most powerful force in the Universe--LOVE!

    A really nice set, Morning...
    PEACE!

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  11. I haven't seen haiku like this before - you definitely capture a series of haiku and I love the rays of light woven through.

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  12. Oh my ... you are prolific! So much light! :)

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  13. VeryenLIGHTening..indeed
    ..thanks.. Morning, Good Morning..

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  14. Love the light in your haiku...love does light a heart it shines upon.. :)

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  15. Cool! Love this poem. Like the De-Light-Ful! :)

    thanks for stopping by my blog

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  16. "Light shoots thru' your eyes..."
    loved that one...:)

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  17. Beautiful, as always, Morning! I love the "light" found playing in your words :) Blessings, Terri

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  18. In the light of love and care,
    By becoming the air

    really like this line - very smoothe flow and vivid image too.

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  19. Love the many shades of light!!

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  20. Lovely sentiments on light.

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  21. Really nice, especially the fifth one:)

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  22. Morning, this is beautiful, from the title all through to the end of the text. Haiku is such a wonderful form, and I really also enjoy strings of related ones, like this.

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  23. well knitted set ~~ thank you for sharing!

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  24. I wouldn't mind feeling a love like that :)
    Nice poetry

    lukewater

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  25. *round of applause* well composed :)

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  26. I love this verse:
    'Hold me all night long,
    In the light of love and care,
    By becoming the air.'

    Makes me think of dreaming

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  27. Love this. Favorite line: "Let’s go for a hide,
    Where I pretend to be bride"

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  28. Lovely Haiku sets. Each brings such beauty to the meaning of light.


    Melanie

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  29. Love the haiku... I'm so not good at haiku. Love the way these flow. Thank you for this.

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  30. Lovely, Monday. You're hallmark positive thinking. Wonderful.

    Hope you had a fab Thanksgiving.

    Warmest regards,
    Jamie Dedes

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  31. Absolutely lovely.

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  32. Hello my dear friend! Enjoyed the post, loved the read... Congrats! Thank you for stopping by! I really do appreciate your taking the time to leave a comment...I read each and everyone of them. I hope your day is a good one and that you will come back again soon. Greetings from Rio de Janeiro/Brasil!
    Nelson Souzza :)

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  33. Such a great positive poem amidst a lot of negative....thankyou for your fun comment on my post!

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  34. Morning,
    My, you lighted it up all the way. Great sets of haiku!

    Hank

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  35. Lovely Haiku. My favourite is
    "Light shoots through your eyes,
    Making my heart jump with joy,
    What a sweet contact".
    Brought a smile to my face.

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  36. Hello.
    I'm always entertained whenever I visit here. Love these Haiku. The image is spot on too.
    Thanks for sharing & visiting. I appreciate the comment.

    A Sweet, Spanish Flower

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  37. Well written!
    "Light shoots through your eyes,
    Making my heart jump with joy"
    Thank you for sharing!

    -Erick Flores

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