Monday, November 14, 2011

Beautifulness (Submitted to Magpie Tale)


Block the noises,
Make your choices,
Don’t think that much,
because thinking is painful.
Ignore the jeers,
See beyond your peers,
Because if you don’t,
You will stop smiling.
Dream life beautiful,
Feel life zestful,
Know your own worthiness,
Because subjective treatment makes no sense,
Know that you are fine,
and you can make life divine,
Beautifulness.

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28 comments:

  1. Susie ClevengerNovember 14, 2011 at 1:33 PM

    Don't think that much..I am so guilty of that at time...others I just don't think at all..just do it.
    A beautiful encouragement to let go and live life!

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  2. VictoriaNovember 14, 2011 at 4:11 PM

    You can make life divine...a good reminded to make choices but not have to beat ourselves to death when we do our best.

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  3. StephanieNovember 14, 2011 at 5:31 PM

    This is simply lovely. Wise sentiments. =)

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  4. Brian MillerNovember 14, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    each of these is a choice we make to live daily

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  5. GraceNovember 14, 2011 at 7:47 PM

    Wonderful reflections.. I like the brave and beautiful voice ~

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  6. Tumblewords:November 14, 2011 at 10:19 PM

    Wise and lovely!

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  7. AnonymousNovember 15, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    it's important to know one's worthiness - own it - and love it!!! Best gift to give yourself - no one else can do it!!

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  8. AnonymousNovember 15, 2011 at 1:04 AM

    it's important to know one's worthiness - own it - and love it!!! Best gift to give yourself - no one else can do it!!

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  9. RashmiNovember 15, 2011 at 1:10 AM

    Positive thinking...
    Lovely poem with a great message..

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  10. Brother OllieNovember 15, 2011 at 4:41 AM

    light hearted, and great flow - keep 'em coming

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  11. Dave KingNovember 15, 2011 at 4:46 AM

    Excellent advice woven into light hearted lines with hidden depths.

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  12. Classic NYerNovember 15, 2011 at 5:21 AM

    Wow... you just seriously put happy tears into my eyes with this one.

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  13. UnknownNovember 15, 2011 at 5:56 AM

    reflective poetry that makes one think and reassess....thank you x

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  14. Carrie Van HornNovember 15, 2011 at 6:41 AM

    This is beauty. :-)

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  15. Mpu Cuk IlalangNovember 15, 2011 at 7:46 AM

    thinking is painful.

    Agreed 100%
    :D

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  16. LynNovember 15, 2011 at 9:19 AM

    This is a lovely chant..positive thinking wins the game...thank you!!

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  17. Bethe77November 15, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    Becoming! Beautiful
    Blessings

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  18. Susan AndersonNovember 15, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    We all have that freedom to make choices, for better or for worse.

    I choose for better!

    =)

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  19. HelenaNovember 15, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    A pleasant chin-lifter this one. Spirits up!!

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  20. Adura OjoNovember 15, 2011 at 3:25 PM

    So uplifting. Thank you!
    I love:
    "Know that you are fine, and you can make life divine"

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  21. Lucky CharmerNovember 15, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    lovely piece. people need encouragement like this sometimes.

    xxx

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  22. Becky SainNovember 16, 2011 at 8:51 AM

    I am the absolute worlds best over-thinker! I should put that on a mug.
    Nicely done!

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  23. AnonymousNovember 16, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    "Don’t think that much,
    because thinking is painful"

    that hit me the most...

    i agree with the "beautifulness"

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  24. AnonymousNovember 17, 2011 at 7:52 AM

    Tremendously applauded. Loved it. How to keep your own mind and believe in yourself. Brilliant!

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  25. Chronicles of IllusionsNovember 19, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    eally nice reflective piece - great writing

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  26. susan m hinckleyNovember 19, 2011 at 7:42 PM

    Lovely piece -- I really like the use of the world "beautifulness"

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  27. AnonymousNovember 19, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Self-worth is a must. Many wonderful affirmations here, Morning--pure "beautifulness". ;)

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  28. AnonymousNovember 27, 2011 at 2:20 AM

    Morning, this is simply just EXQUISITE writing!

    "Don’t think that much,
    because thinking is painful."

    This line speaks directly to me...but I also believed I must go there even if it's painful...and now that I'm on the other side...
    I got to here:

    "Know your own worthiness,
    Because subjective treatment makes no sense," !

    Thanks for such beautiful writing. Emanita01

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