i often
go nuts
on seasons.
like watching
the water flooding
the Han river
as a primary schooler
on Heliu street,
the dam becomes
low and weak-
containing fast speed raindrops,
a pregnant woman's bubble tummy,
anytime the water could break the dam,
and rushing fluid will occupy residents,
harboring boats will afloat
above the sea of water,
life gains and loses
at the same time.
.
a fish bone,
a snowdrop plant downstream,
it's spring in Autumn,
it's red cell in your Bloodstream.
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about the perfect poet award, I gladly take it, and tag
Bruce and Neni for week 80 Thursday poets rally, have a loving February.
smart post.
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ReplyDeleteI think the blood is thicker than water.. lots of images here.. bringing it together at the end
ReplyDeleteWonderful images throughout!
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ReplyDeleteI especially love the image of the water flooding the Han river.......are you really blogging from Greenland? How wonderful! I went looking for info about you and cant find any - you live in what I have been told is a beautiful landscape.
ReplyDeleteGreenland is a place near Europe, thanks,
ReplyDeletePeople who are pregnant, People who live near dams--I wish they could be prepared and not be subject to the seasons rages. Fine focus.
ReplyDeletewonderful.
ReplyDeleteexcellent.
ReplyDeleteexcellent imagery.
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ReplyDeleteLoved the imagery!!
ReplyDeleteWhat lovely imagery in your poem. It's beautiful. I enjoyed it so much.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery throughout; intense and fluid.
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful imagery flowing through!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery.
ReplyDeleteway to go.
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