Monday, February 9, 2015
Birds In Trees, Birds on Wires (A tribe to Thursday Poets Rally week 80)
i walked outdoor
and looked at all the birds,
some hide themselves inside tree leaves,
many simply sit on the wire,
a string of goshawks and sparrows,
they form a moving line
which makes my moment sublime.
.
my joy to see the day's representation,
a blue jay lands on my shoulder,
a brown robin whispers in my ear,
they make me fall out of breath,
withholding myself very stilly,
i catch these birds' wings,
flying silently, south.
hyde park poetry palace thursdy poets rally week 80 (Feb 4 -Feb 17, 2015)
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