Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Love Is...

Chasing Rainbow By Jude Underwood
 

Thursday Flash Fiction Week 28: Innocence and Dreams

Hyde Park Thursday Poets Rally Week 74 (October 4 -October 10)


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Love is
A rain of cello strings
In the wind,
.
The mind’s cake
Sliced evenly,
.
The old faithful
Springing at the heart of light.
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Deep in dark waters
unlocked lips, sunlit lurking.
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A castle,
Not of rocks but snowy clouds beyond
The reach of earth,
.
One single expression
to the unfrenzied space,
.
The sips of honey near the cabinet
The bite into bread again.

37 comments:

  1. to me,

    love is selfless contributions!

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  2. you are doing better than ever.

    cheers!

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  3. loved this! especially the cake verse :3

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  4. love is forever theme,

    no one can fully understand how or why exactly.

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  5. love your point of view on love in general.

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  6. A castle,
    Not of rocks but snowy clouds beyond
    The reach of earth,

    Love the imagery in this piece. This is my favorite stanza!

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  7. I love the play of emotions and the dance of images. Excellent work!

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  8. You painted a fantasy here. Everybody would love 'love' this way but then again reality sets in. Nice write.

    Cheers!

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  9. Love is a whole other world sometimes, and you've painted its picture very well!

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