Wednesday, November 11, 2015

ABC Wednesday, R is for raw poetry, Three Word Wednesday,

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Raw poetry comes
when one's skills await until
well done
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smoking sausages
the alternate of pork ribs 
bake---boil
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rivers of overall friends 
peaceful flare to shuttling wars
poor-rich 
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radio shack wires up
lots of boxes of musical products
window-door
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type a word or two
thoughts climb the screen via fingernails
mouse-cat
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Venom, fossil, or bones
ancient dinosaurs distract museum audiences
wiggle-motionless 
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The Tuesday Platform

 Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques #18 Yugen haiku

 
3WW Week No. 453

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23 comments:

  1. Wonderful entry... poetry always toouches ones soul

    Have a nice abc-day / -week

    ♫ M e l ☺ d y ♫ (abc-w-team)

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  2. Very nice series of haiku. Welcome at Carpe Diem.

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  3. I especially LOVE the first stanza

    ROG, ABCW

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  4. Rivers of friends...I like it.

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  5. Interesting style of poetry.

    Leslie
    abcw team

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  6. The very definition of raw poetry - raw and alive - Venom, fossil, or bones - a brilliant line!

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  7. Very interesting haiku! I was curious, so explored your Yugen link - to my delight and gratitude. Needless to say, I'll be having a go. :)

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  8. There is poetry everywhere we look, the secret is to take the reader into another world. Your poem certainly set my mind seeing those pictures you created.

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