Sunday Swirl Prompt
At last, the child gassed up the pain in him,
baring evidence of hidden resentments from within,
Not his fault, though!
Smooth relation can be violated for many reasons,
from the child's point of view, it's a mother's
duty to soothe the gaps between couples,
when in solitude, it's natural for one to see things
in darkness, due to absence of refreshing elements,
that could upgrade the relation, otherwise,
the once upon a time positive energy
and pleasant banters can be replaced by silence,
We all know 5 + 4 = 9,
3 x 3 = 9,
but numbers are relative,
Shifting gears is needed to claim happiness,
My morning coffee would not be satisfying
without creamy milk, and
the sun is yellow,
the sky is blue,
the clouds are white,
let our actions and thoughts shine cool,
that's the way to advance comfort times,
I wish you, joy and satisfaction
in every possible section
of life, i love you, my child,
bless you, please stay upbeat
and be an individual that's honest,
productive, helpful,
and never quit upon defeat.
baring evidence of hidden resentments from within,
Not his fault, though!
Smooth relation can be violated for many reasons,
from the child's point of view, it's a mother's
duty to soothe the gaps between couples,
when in solitude, it's natural for one to see things
in darkness, due to absence of refreshing elements,
that could upgrade the relation, otherwise,
the once upon a time positive energy
and pleasant banters can be replaced by silence,
We all know 5 + 4 = 9,
3 x 3 = 9,
but numbers are relative,
Shifting gears is needed to claim happiness,
My morning coffee would not be satisfying
without creamy milk, and
the sun is yellow,
the sky is blue,
the clouds are white,
let our actions and thoughts shine cool,
that's the way to advance comfort times,
I wish you, joy and satisfaction
in every possible section
of life, i love you, my child,
bless you, please stay upbeat
and be an individual that's honest,
productive, helpful,
and never quit upon defeat.
Image Credit; Google.com
A Haiku
when things seem uncool,
you must remain calm and true,
we always love you.
Trifecta: Trifecta: Week Forty-One
absence
trying to combine all prompts.
ReplyDeletethus write this,
thanks for reading.
Good try
ReplyDeleteWow, that's a lot of challenges in one post. Great job!
ReplyDeleteThat WAS ambitious to try to connect all those prompts. It was an interesting read, no doubt!
ReplyDeletevery nice written. Touching!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your writings...
ReplyDeleteSandy
Nice piece, tho I'm not sure what YOUR H is here - please enlighten.
ReplyDeleteROG, ABC Wednesday team
is it HUMP day?
ReplyDeletei have H for happiness.
ReplyDeleteHonest and helpful, we need more of those.
ReplyDeleteHello in Korean language
Rose, ABC Wednesday Team
lovely tribe.
ReplyDeletei hear ya.
ReplyDeleteit will pass.
a golden tribe.
ReplyDeleteyour love for your kids is obvious and well told.
ReplyDeletesincere and touching.
ReplyDeleteu rock.
cheer up.
ReplyDeletecommunication helps.
ReplyDeletewonderful advice to your child.
ReplyDeletethoughtful piece.
ReplyDeleteexcellent.
ReplyDeleteway two goat.
ReplyDeleteheart felt words.
ReplyDeleteYou have some lovely words of advice for your child. Thanks for linking up. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.
ReplyDeleteNow, that's a lot of links in one post, and it was a good try!
ReplyDeleteLovely advice♫ The haiku was a nice touch♪
ReplyDeleteWow! impressive!
ReplyDeleteThe photo helped to bring your words into focus. No pun intended. Having grown up in an environment where the adult often spoke in shouts and fits...I think I had to learn early to learn 'calm' in spite of lack of nurture.
ReplyDeleteI went with humor this time around:
http://julesgemsandstuff.blogspot.com/2012/09/sw-72-doughboy.html
amazing tribe.
ReplyDeleteWhat a thoughtful and moving piece of writing. Excellent! Brava!!
ReplyDeleteI remember hating when my parents fought.
ReplyDeleteIt hits hard...
ReplyDeletetipsy fingers play footsie
good one.
ReplyDeletethoughtful.
ReplyDeletetouching.
ReplyDeleteRealistic and very touching. Parenting is like this....we wish to cram so much into a window of time that is relatively small in comparison to everything that will touch their lives. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteA profoundly perfect piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteParenthood is such a responsibility. Every action defines a child's heart.
Thank you for sharing this amazing writing with us.
A+
touching stone like piece.
ReplyDeletegreat poetry form,
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