Thursday, June 7, 2012

Love Is Blind

Being oblivious of the situations
and feeling restless,
She journeys through trapped planets
in drowned silence
cross the diamond studded sky,
Love is blind,
Love is mindless associations,
Anxious spark awaits in icy wind
as a fleeting fire ignites life,
The ember forms colored hues,
Smoldering with hope,
Flickering,
Yet transforming.

55 comments:

  1. Love is mindless associations........
    Love is...
    YO=our words are beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. She journeys through trapped planets in drowned silence...powerful...nice work

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  3. beautiful words!
    Thanks for stopping by my blog!
    have a great weekend - Heather

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  4. In some ways true love has to be blind for us to overlook those things which drive us crazy about the person we love, (annoying habits etc) and once we can love them past all that I can think we can say love is blind...
    Lovely. I love the travel in this, planets, space...

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  5. Love is blind and when often enough said it would turn out to be true.We cannot get 100% of our desires and dreams fulfilled but we accept the faults ans shortcomings 'cos love is blind. What if love is not blind? I dread to think!

    Hank

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  6. What a great poem - it is so true too. "Flickering, Yet transforming." I love the association of love to a flame - how strong and powerful it can be, and yet how delicate it can be. Your poem wonderfully illustrates love as well as discovering love with perfection. Thank you for sharing!

    Here's mine: Butterflies

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  7. Awesome write, Morning! Very enjoyable read!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/23/the-last-grain-of-sand/

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  8. Powerful and moving... Love is mindless associations--loved that one--and Flickering / Yet transforming... Brilliant. Thanks for a great read!

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  9. If the blinders come off, egad! Lovely thoughts and words!

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  10. Enjoyable read! Love it!
    Love is so blind yet so transforming as you said.
    Blessing

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  11. I finally made a blogger profile so I could follow you and gooseberry garden. I love reading your work :)

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  12. Love is blind and mindless, yet there it is. K.

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  13. While I am a firm believer that love isn't blind, I have to say I really liked this. There's so many lines that were so beautiful they lingered in my mind. Great piece thanks for sharing!

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  14. while mindless and blind, love can certainly be transforming...

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  15. I love this - just beautifully expressed from start to finish. Thank you.

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  16. An extraordinary piece.. those first five lines are some of the best I've read in a long time, for opening the imagination wide.

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  17. ") "drowned silence" hmmm lovely!
    my entry: http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/11/24/your-asogwe/

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  18. "She journeys through trapped planets
    in drowned silence", that's a beautiful expression, Morning. Loved this piece.

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  19. A fresh look at an old saying, there's a lot to see in this one, really excellent.

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  20. beautiful and vivid visions ...thank you x

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  21. She journeys through trapped planets
    in drowned silence
    Lovely! Just lovely verse here.
    Thank you Morning!
    emanita01

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  22. She journeys through trapped planets in drowned silence
    cross the diamond studded sky


    Wonderful imagery!!

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  23. "Anxious spark awaits in icy wind"
    I adore this line. This is a great job in enticing the senses. Thank you for sharing.

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  24. Very enjoyable word play. Well done!

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  25. Embers contain that spark of hope. :) Lovely work.

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  26. "Love is mindless associations" Well written and expressed!

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  27. I especially like the line about traveling through trapped planets. It gives an ethereal feel to the poem.

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  28. Love is the freedom of choice. Flight is felt from your thoughts, great prose!

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  29. Freedom to everyone.
    Lovely poem, thank you for sharing.

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  30. wonderfully written.brilliant imagery.

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  31. mindless associations ... that is the best way to describe it! wonderfully inspiring and bursting with such beautiful imagery! Adore this! Happy you shared with FWF! Thank you! xox

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  32. This poem was wonderful.

    I do not comment often on others blogs but I felt compelled to in yours.

    You have a gift.

    Indie

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  33. Beautiful the way you expressed! :)

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  34. Loved the strong sentence structures. :)

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  35. Really nice imagery here! Well done and thanks for sharing.

    Here's my humble contribution for this week:

    http://randommisanthrope.com/2012/03/04/twenty-first-century-sins/

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  36. "yet transforming" ... how true. We wouldn't want to do without it, however blind. ;-)

    Well done.

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  37. agree to how love is blind, its like we have a veil around our eyes not seeing the true person we thought we knew..

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  38. Love does flicker and transform.

    Cheers,

    Mark Butkus

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  39. you have no idea just how much this is me right now.
    made me cry.
    thank you!

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  40. Smoldering with hope...some strong words here. Loved it.

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  41. It's heartwarming to read these comments.

    Thanks.

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  42. Sorry for being absent,

    trying to give my project a finish these days.

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  43. Indeed, truly blind. Only the bystander would see it best. Though love may not work out everything at times, but it's true that it can be transformational.

    Good illustrtion of blind love!

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  44. Thanks for the talented words.

    love it.

    :)

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