wow nice meaning !
wow! sad! :(http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/h-ku-19-debris/
But faith is everything. Nice haiku.
Faith does take us a long way!So breathe, smile and grin!
good use of words! but it makes the haiku optimistic. keep going!sarah
Wonderful optimistic spin. Faith is sometimes all that will carry us through.Shalom,http://cloakedmonk.com/2011/02/19/children/
Loved it Ji.. Thanks for Sharing..Someone is Special
Nice! You could have submitted this one for the "Faith" prompt as well! Thanks for visiting my blog!
Beautifully written haiku, love it :)
very lovely. beautiful take on the theme.your talent is really amazing.trisha
I like the idea in this poem. Maybe the last line could be shifted to "only faith remains"? That would make it a more succinct and immediate statement, rather than using the infinitive and putting distance between the reader and the idea. :o) Here's my offering this week:http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2012/04/04/drafting-in-memoriam-adrienne-rich/