Wednesday, March 4, 2015

haiku

early at morning,
icy sidewalk loses fraction,
a fall without caring.
.
ankle and feet injury,
purple, blue, red, and painful,
a March incident.
.
Mountain lake point,
wild geese meet a troop of cranes,
the moon ducks her head!


 
 
 
hyde park thursday poetry rally week 81: (Feb 25- March 11, 2015
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 4, 2015 at 12:50 PM

    animated one.

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  2. Lita V.March 4, 2015 at 1:12 PM

    Very nice. I like how your poems shows different sides of winter. I love the ending: "The moon ducks her head!" It definitely leaves the reader to wonder what would happen next! Well done!

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  3. AnonymousMarch 4, 2015 at 1:13 PM

    vivid imagery and lovely haiku.

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  4. AnonymousMarch 4, 2015 at 1:45 PM

    stunning haiku.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 4, 2015 at 2:05 PM

    powerful.......

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  6. Hyde Park Poetry PalaceMarch 5, 2015 at 12:27 PM

    stunning haiku.

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  7. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 9:20 AM

    wonderful.

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  8. the voice in my throatMarch 6, 2015 at 9:20 AM

    haiku is cool.

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  9. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 10:59 AM

    amazing haiku.

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  10. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 11:13 AM

    wise.

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  11. AnonymousMarch 6, 2015 at 11:43 AM

    love what you write here!

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  12. Lotie Bollag Mosher Kloppenburg Romney March 6, 2015 at 12:12 PM

    yes, smiles.

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  13. Amrit SinhaMarch 7, 2015 at 8:32 AM

    I love early morning scenery :-)

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  14. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton March 7, 2015 at 8:00 PM

    sweet and refreshing.

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  15. Drew Doyle Storm Snyder MinowMarch 8, 2015 at 12:17 PM

    love your haiku.

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  16. McCormickMarch 8, 2015 at 1:20 PM

    wow, a fun treat.

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  17. AnonymousMarch 10, 2015 at 8:43 AM

    well crafted.

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