This was pithy!
awesomemakes me want to hope in a pool right now!
good one! I love the unexpected zipper bags at the end.
The perfect addition to free write friday! The rhyming made this great fun in itself! Thanks so much! Now I'm ready to play!
I love it. We'll all be over for a swim and some BBQ.
brilliant poem jingle, great suggestions ;)will keep them in mind.