tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post8059588940613102094..comments2024-03-28T13:35:32.559-05:00Comments on Sunrising from The Edge of The Greenland: A Blog For Fantasy, Imaginations, and Fairy Tales: Pre-existence Makes Sense Only If - - -Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-68559051873275421382011-10-09T18:31:22.662-05:002011-10-09T18:31:22.662-05:00That first couplet is totally brilliant. Wow.That first couplet is totally brilliant. Wow.Jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-23561899367003479612011-10-09T08:46:52.289-05:002011-10-09T08:46:52.289-05:00Very powerful, and original, I loved it, thank you...Very powerful, and original, I loved it, thank you, much appreciated, WSJohn E. WordSlingerhttp://johnewordslinger.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-3867812414324108402011-10-07T07:41:50.035-05:002011-10-07T07:41:50.035-05:00I enjoyed the cadence and flow of words.
Speciall...I enjoyed the cadence and flow of words.<br /><br />Specially the last verses.. you come on strong~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-27448936575172079752011-10-07T06:21:42.960-05:002011-10-07T06:21:42.960-05:00"Nor did I feel deprived
Since grace falls at..."Nor did I feel deprived<br />Since grace falls at my birth"...what superb two lines...the whole poem is so readable and poem are meant to be read out loud....love it...thankyou also for popping over to my site.Gerry Snapehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07269492251928362799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-50817709078706529192011-10-06T23:39:25.181-05:002011-10-06T23:39:25.181-05:00Hi,
You are really an amazing writer. There are s...Hi,<br />You are really an amazing writer. There are some profound statements there. I really enjoyed it. It saddens me that history can sometimes be lost. Thanks for visiting me and for your sweet comment.Have a Daily Cup of Mrs. Olsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15446091501170762899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-18070345528100325042011-10-06T21:33:57.010-05:002011-10-06T21:33:57.010-05:00Well written! I liked reading here today. Enjoy yo...Well written! I liked reading here today. Enjoy your weekend and thanks for the share!Annesphamilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09355786666073982088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-44457230038472642272011-10-06T18:40:38.994-05:002011-10-06T18:40:38.994-05:00Very nicely done, love the first and second stanza...Very nicely done, love the first and second stanza's- written very well. Thanks for the readAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-79126978465929085662011-10-06T18:31:09.011-05:002011-10-06T18:31:09.011-05:00I thought this had a mystical feel to it, wonderin...I thought this had a mystical feel to it, wondering of past lifetimes colliding with the present.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-50889781071282222172011-10-06T18:27:40.683-05:002011-10-06T18:27:40.683-05:00Mysterious... love the rhythm and flow.Mysterious... love the rhythm and flow.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-5947371402945331002011-10-06T13:41:39.429-05:002011-10-06T13:41:39.429-05:00I really enjoyed this! The last two lines have lef...I really enjoyed this! The last two lines have left me pondering.JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-20206458092775908912011-10-06T13:31:35.968-05:002011-10-06T13:31:35.968-05:00Very interesting beginning and close. (And middle....Very interesting beginning and close. (And middle.)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-11153499984966508512011-10-06T12:59:52.986-05:002011-10-06T12:59:52.986-05:00Your poem is a puzzle to ponder over...from the fi...Your poem is a puzzle to ponder over...from the first line to the last. I love poems like this that leave the reader in a mystery at the end. :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-66221224091095311602011-10-06T12:56:47.984-05:002011-10-06T12:56:47.984-05:00I enjoyed your take on life (and pre-existence!) I...I enjoyed your take on life (and pre-existence!) It gave me something to think about!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-68764027313656947082011-10-06T11:59:37.051-05:002011-10-06T11:59:37.051-05:00The last two lines surprise and, in a way, delight...The last two lines surprise and, in a way, delight!Victoria Ceretto-Slottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11791036961620087347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-86537116976878316932011-10-06T11:55:50.312-05:002011-10-06T11:55:50.312-05:00Deep thoughts here. I'm interpreting it to mea...Deep thoughts here. I'm interpreting it to mean that you know little about history because you weren't born yet. All you know has come from books.EG CameraGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12803759124643467711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-2836161798349491392011-10-06T11:42:00.134-05:002011-10-06T11:42:00.134-05:00good starter:
I didn't know I wasn't ther...good starter:<br /><br />I didn't know I wasn't there,<br />I won't know I'm not,<br /><br />the poem's got a nice rhythm and 3-beat canter, like History is motion. ;-)<br /><br />purifying facts from books is neat....for, that's what we do, isn't it?<br /><br />Nice poem. Thank you.tinkwelbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14163026661564191285noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-28627677952005038122011-10-06T10:20:04.072-05:002011-10-06T10:20:04.072-05:00Thought provoking ... makes me think ... "I&#...Thought provoking ... makes me think ... "I'm not married to you, No need to come to my rescue."<br /><br />I've been reading this poem multiple times ... <br /><br />Great write!Bajanpoethttp://poetwhispers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-46719505843569105622011-10-06T09:17:09.652-05:002011-10-06T09:17:09.652-05:00Lovely, the past is what helps shape the present t...Lovely, the past is what helps shape the present though, whether we were there or not. Great alibi!~! LOL<br />Lovely, deep and thought provoking.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-17284579661388220162011-10-06T08:57:20.182-05:002011-10-06T08:57:20.182-05:00"I didn't know I was there..." remin..."I didn't know I was there..." reminds me of that child living in poverty. Doesn't even know of opulence yet. And when child gets there, might not remember that it once was not.<br />__________________________<br /><br />A hand reaches out for help. My obligation (to myself) is to grab that hand and at least show what happened to turn my own life around.<br />__________________________<br /><br />Aside from your talent and (humor?) I really like (LOVE!--grin!) that I can publish a comment here without having to fill in stupid verification letters. THANK YOU!!!steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-69070372348086262052011-10-06T08:38:17.717-05:002011-10-06T08:38:17.717-05:00Much to think about here....stunning!Much to think about here....stunning!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-75691401855957723832011-10-06T07:55:47.122-05:002011-10-06T07:55:47.122-05:00This is excellent and paints a wonderful picture. ...This is excellent and paints a wonderful picture. Thank you for stopping by.Debra Gray-Elliotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13836657468924341727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-49449757899560578522011-10-06T07:23:18.659-05:002011-10-06T07:23:18.659-05:00This poem makes one think. This is a very interes...This poem makes one think. This is a very interesting line of thought!Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-64796737344940755002011-10-06T03:24:42.205-05:002011-10-06T03:24:42.205-05:00wonderful picture :)wonderful picture :)Tina´s PicStoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00144127584040088355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-67416240737231705892011-10-06T00:45:41.507-05:002011-10-06T00:45:41.507-05:00What a cool concept! Nicely done. Very nicely done...What a cool concept! Nicely done. Very nicely done.Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-10934569984486182092011-10-05T22:55:09.246-05:002011-10-05T22:55:09.246-05:00smiles...this got my immediate attention because i...smiles...this got my immediate attention because i was there this summer in rome....at the colloseum...yeah but living in the moment is what is important...though there's a lot we can learn from the pastClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com