tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post1261502874554898926..comments2024-03-28T13:35:32.559-05:00Comments on Sunrising from The Edge of The Greenland: A Blog For Fantasy, Imaginations, and Fairy Tales: Magpie Tale-A Woman's Defeat!Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-39534615356216459122011-09-15T00:35:10.016-05:002011-09-15T00:35:10.016-05:00such a sad tale...such a sad tale...e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-90648679525483172612011-04-21T09:42:22.697-05:002011-04-21T09:42:22.697-05:00thats how majority of cyber romances end.
you mad...thats how majority of cyber romances end.<br /><br />you made the story come alive.trishahttp://mydomainpvt.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-32968499077603912962011-04-20T21:12:21.895-05:002011-04-20T21:12:21.895-05:00WoW! This is some read. Fiction or not...this is i...WoW! This is some read. Fiction or not...this is incredibly real. Betrayal is such a bitter pill to swallow. Nobody wins. Very nicely done.<br /><br />You might like a poem I wrote on such a subject here:<br /><br />http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/04/fire-of-truth.htmlThe Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-21827350392198883042011-04-18T21:29:06.347-05:002011-04-18T21:29:06.347-05:00So much can be traced back to appetites...trouble ...So much can be traced back to appetites...trouble and ecstasy!<br /><br />Thank you for the kind words, my dear. I'm happy to have your eyes on the page!Irish Gumbohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-32610103489258644792011-04-18T05:58:19.103-05:002011-04-18T05:58:19.103-05:00Sad but true! you're a realist :)Sad but true! you're a realist :)indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-76904240833831450322011-04-17T17:10:44.755-05:002011-04-17T17:10:44.755-05:00Oh, so true. The woman never wins. Nice take on th...Oh, so true. The woman never wins. Nice take on the magpie!dshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07616750784052488695noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-79929717515870165472011-04-17T12:23:26.053-05:002011-04-17T12:23:26.053-05:00this flowed well, the narration vivid. like Steve ...this flowed well, the narration vivid. like Steve says, as a straightup fiction, this is quite excellent! :)<br /><br /><a href="http://wp.me/p11nRA-XH" rel="nofollow">My Magpie Post</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-20949046686297079862011-04-16T16:20:42.084-05:002011-04-16T16:20:42.084-05:00Well-written morality tale; unless there's a &...Well-written morality tale; unless there's a 'happy for now' ending/more to this tale, most romance markets won't touch this.<br /><br />As a straight-up fiction piece, this is excellent.Steve Isaakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07162341357622058518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-1184288822202791142011-04-16T10:16:35.755-05:002011-04-16T10:16:35.755-05:00It may well be a work of fiction here but there ar...It may well be a work of fiction here but there are many men and women who go through this experience. The woman rarely wins! But if she were to, what would she win?<br /><br />When I was much younger I recall a friend of my mother telling her (which she then repeated to me!) that she occasionally had 'flings' with younger men but that she never allowed herself to get emotionally involved and that it spiced up her marriage. As a 20 something, I was shocked! <br /><br />Good take.The Blog of Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00650938872732748697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-77623326418507628472011-04-15T23:01:42.506-05:002011-04-15T23:01:42.506-05:00The story line remains the same... unending, but n...The story line remains the same... unending, but newly discovered by each of its villains.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-85800967193640258932011-04-15T12:37:15.180-05:002011-04-15T12:37:15.180-05:00Good story from a difficult situation.Good story from a difficult situation.Trellissimohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-20929281572670632432011-04-13T23:50:17.763-05:002011-04-13T23:50:17.763-05:00Good tale - sounds like nonfiction!Good tale - sounds like nonfiction!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-90398644956566078302011-04-13T13:18:23.344-05:002011-04-13T13:18:23.344-05:00Forbidden excitement generally parks itself in a d...Forbidden excitement generally parks itself in a dead end...effectively illustrated!Donna B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07015770616281528620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-51415748060163806832011-04-13T02:39:51.984-05:002011-04-13T02:39:51.984-05:00sigh! too true. But how interesting that he blocke...sigh! too true. But how interesting that he blocked her emails and changed his number.earlybirdhttp://mangetoutetc.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-666388253314486772011-04-12T12:55:12.297-05:002011-04-12T12:55:12.297-05:00I agree with Lyn! This is one (sad) story which wi...I agree with Lyn! This is one (sad) story which will never be old- no matter how much time goes by..<br /><br />Then again, forget the one who forgets you!<br /><br />Many Hugs xxxOliviahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11755748082674775369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-69802563744193813882011-04-12T11:55:59.031-05:002011-04-12T11:55:59.031-05:00Great writing!
physics of it allGreat writing!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2011/04/physics-of-it-all.html" rel="nofollow">physics of it all</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-60911319973785692712011-04-12T10:26:06.991-05:002011-04-12T10:26:06.991-05:00This story made me sad, but at the same time, I co...This story made me sad, but at the same time, I couldn't help thinking as I was reading it that it was sexy, too.<br /><br />"Men always hunger for women." This made me laugh out loud because it's true! I think a lot of us don't know what power we have over men. We can use that to our advantage, then maybe, we won't lose.The Reason You Comehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10068844198054896532noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4923811434302284779.post-12591009101604859862011-04-12T08:14:24.784-05:002011-04-12T08:14:24.784-05:00The game will never be equal..women/dream..men/do!...The game will never be equal..women/dream..men/do! But the old story is ever new!! You got it!!Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.com